Summary: A Bird Soaring High

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DeMar Davis 6-21-12 Engl 1102 Dr.Raynie A Bird Soaring High Philadelphia the city of brotherly love, the city with professional teams that are great, has history in the making, and setting new records, it is the city with the best team in the National Football League right now, The Philadelphia Eagles. It has been a long, long time since a NFL team got so cocky, so quickly. Sensing an opportunity for a real run at what would be their first-ever Super Bowl championship, the Eagles shoved all their chips to the middle of their table and went after every top players they could get to come along for their ride. Other teams, networks, and hall of famers called the Eagles the dream team. Even…show more content…
One round later, they selected defensive end Vinny Curry, adding depth to a group that already includes tackles Mike Patterson and Cullen Jenkins; and end Trent Cole, one of the most complete players at his position. Of course, the man called colossus Jason Babin, third in the NFL in 2011 with 18 sacks. Most of the players battled injuries last year and some of the players were inexperience in the game. Still in pass rushing defense, last year they led the NFL with the most sacks thanks to defensive ends Jason Babin and Trent Cole. Having speed, agility, power, and awareness is the key components for winning a game on defense and the Eagles have all of that. Starting with the secondary led by all-pro cornerback Nnamdi Asomugha that had a dreadful year in his first year with team but, since he got a feel of the National Conference and adapt to the team now, I can see plenty of interceptions coming his way next season. On the other side of the field is Dominique Rodgers-Cromartie also first year with the team who suffered knee problems along the way. Over the off season activities the team should have enough chemistry to become an elite defense…show more content…
| 21 my paper have three main points with supporting details for each body. | Argument Effectiveness and Development (35 points) The writer clearly seeks to persuade others to adopt his or her view and does not merely state a position. In addition to having a clear thesis, the paper displays good use of logic and evidence to carry its points. | 30 I used precise information watch games, interviews, and statistics to clarify why the Eagles are the best team in the NFL. | Citation in the paper and on the works cited page (20 points) The writer uses quotes correctly, integrating them into one of his or her own sentences in addition to following M.L.A. style citation format. Moreover, the works cited page is in correct M.L.A. style. | 15 I used websites and a book about the eagle’s history for research but should have more quotes in the paper. | Standard American English (25 points) The writer uses only Standard American English, avoiding the major grammar errors and inappropriate features outlined in the attachment to the syllabus. | 25 used no slang and stayed with the format.

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