Story Based on Snowdrops by A.D Miller

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Commentary My text is written using the crime fiction story ‘Snowdrops’ by A.D Miller as my inspiration. My story is about a middle aged man who comes to know a young woman who is a superstitious yet intriguing character. Throughout my story, a close relationship occurs between the two, however there is a reason behind this which he eventually discovers. My story is written in the first person similar to that of ’ Snow Drops.’ using this allows the reader to be fully aware of what is going on all the time throughout the novel. To add to this it also adds to the amount of explanation that the reader is given about each incident. In my story, the narrator becomes close with the mysterious woman. This makes it clear to the reader what is going to happen as the ending is put at the beginning of the story. This is important as the reader will want to help him in a way, this in conclusion will make the reader want to find out more about what is going to happen and it also creates a lot of suspense. This connects well with Nick from ‘Snowdrops’ as the crime that is committed is put at the beginning and in turn creates a bigger build up right from the start. The reader is told what has happened at the start instead of finding out at the end I used specific words to describe the characters. ‘She was effortlessly beautiful.’ This implies that she does not have to try, it simply comes naturally to her. Also, ‘perfectly brushed to the side’ gives an image of beauty and perfection which is why he is clearly intrigued by her in the first place. We can recognize a clear similarity between Masha from ‘snow drops’ and the woman from my story. For example in ‘snow drops’ Miller describes her ‘long tawny hair’ tawny meaning orange, yellow or brown in colour. It is important to use description like this as it allows the reader to create their own image of the character and in my

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