Raymond's Run

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“Raymond’s Run” By; Nikki Gerald The beginning of “Raymond’s Run" on the page 34 is the exposition. In the text on page 34 line 14 it says “I am a girl with skinny arms and a squeaky voice.” The exposition is the part in a story where you meet all the characters and the setting. Here we meet Squeaky. Also in the text on page 34 line 6 it says “sometimes I slip and say little brother Raymond. But as any fool can see he’s much bigger and much older too... if anyone has something to say about his big head, they have to come by me.” Here we meet Raymond, Squeaky’s big brother. The exposition is like the orientation at a new school. You meet new people and a new place. The exposition is doing just that. The rising action in “Raymond’s Run” is when Squeaky is approached by Gretchen and her minions. In the text on page 37 line 85 it says “But as they get to me, they slow down and I’m ready to fight.” In the Rising action things start to get more intense and more exciting. Also in the text on page 37 line 80 “I see right away that it’s gonna be one of those Dodge City scenes.” Here Squeaky is ready to fight if it’s necessary. This makes the story more exciting and interesting which is the rising action. The climax in Raymond’s Run is when Squeaky starts thinking about Raymond and what lays ahead for him.. In the text page 41 line 240 it says “I can always retire and begin a whole new career with Raymond as my champion.”Also in the text it says 41 line 245 it says “But what has Raymond got to call his own?” This mean that she is wondering about what Raymond has to call his own, his to have. The climax is the exciting part of a story. This is the turning point because Squeaky is more interested with Raymond’s future than her own She thinks she could be his coach, and lead him to be a champ. When Squeaky forgets about her career and thinks about Raymond’s it’s the

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