Memorial Hermann Health Care Research Paper

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(The running head in the title page needs a lead-in statement and should read as such: Running head: WEB REVIEW PAPER. Also, if you use a running head in the title page, it must be used on all pages of the paper. Ref; Center for Writing Excellence, Sample Paper, p. 1, UOP website and APA Manual, p. 229, Para 8.03) Memorial Hermann Health Care System Jaime Gray May 11, 2012 HCS/235 David Olsen (Good elements above) (Title of paper missing. This was also noted in your week two paper) For this assignment I chose Memorial Hermann Healthcare System. (Use italics infrequently in a student paper. It is usually used for titles of books or words that could be misread) They are the largest not-for-profit health…show more content…
They are dedicated to improving healthcare for the people who live in southeast Texas. Their employees embrace a culture of individual accountability and innovation. Part of this process has helped with the focus on remaining on the quality and patient safety which has earned Memorial Hermann numerous awards which also includes the prestigious National Quality Healthcare Award from the National Quality Forum in 2009. It has also been named one of America’s top hospitals by U.S. News & World Report. By Memorial Hermann using its resources to help make a difference in the health of the community, they have contributed over an excess of $300 million annually in uncompensated care and community benefit programs. This also happens to include an award-winning network of public school-based health…show more content…
However, I didn’t see comments regarding the continuum of care in the organization or resource options. I would like to have seen the use of headings to help in the readability and flow of the paper, which was mentioned in your week two paper. The introduction did not preview all the major points of the paper for the reader. Remember, the major points of the introduction should match the assignment. Also, the conclusion also did not review all the major points of the paper for the reader. The title page met most of the appropriate UOP guidelines. However, the running head had a formatting error and if you use a running head in the title page, it must be used on all pages of the paper. Citations were not used in the text. Remember, all references listed in the reference page must also be cited in the text. And speaking of the reference page, it had some formatting errors and should have been placed on a separate page. Also, the instructions in the syllabus stated that a minimum of three references should be used in the paper to support the information, but only one reference was used in the paper. For the most part, the rules of punctuation, spelling and grammar were followed and some errors were noted in the paper. The title of the paper was missing on the first page of the text, which was also noted in your week two paper. The paper was posted late and five points will be

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