Broken Criminal Justice System Analysis

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School to Prison Pipeline September 4, 2013 In the video Attorney General Eric Holder Announce Major Changes to Criminal Justice System, he talked about how the Criminal Justice System is broken. He further more even talks about how children now a days are exposed to crime more than ever before. In his speech about the broken Criminal Justice System. He went into more details to talk about how we need to change why people are in prison. Attorney General Eric Holder says that prisons should only be to punish, deter and rehabilitate, not for the pedi crimes that people are in prison for now. Attorney General Eric Holder then talks about school to prison pipe line. He claims that it starts with reducing the crime seen by young people.…show more content…
Little or no attempt is made to frame the discussion, and paragraphs lack development and internal coherence. | Argument’s path of development is unclear, disjointed, or unfocused. Transitions are absent or unclear. Introductory and concluding paragraphs do not adequately frame the discussion. Body paragraphs lack development and internal coherence and may only be loosely related to each other. | Argument’s path of development is mostly clear but might be more carefully planned. Transitions may be absent or clumsy. Introductory and concluding paragraphs may lack focus or not do enough to frame the discussion. Body paragraphs may lack development or internal coherence. They are clearly related to each other but may not build off of each other in any meaningful way. 9 | Argument proceeds along a path of development that is mostly clear and logical with serviceable transitions and minimal digressions. Introductory and concluding paragraphs are on-task but might do more to frame the discussion. Body paragraphs are internally coherent but might be developed more fully or build off of each other in more meaningful ways. | Argument proceeds along clear and logical path of development with lucid transitions and without unnecessary digressions. Introductory and concluding paragraphs skillfully frame the discussion. Body paragraphs are well developed, internally coherent, and build off…show more content…
The paper demonstrates throughout an inability to communicate effectively using the written word in English. | Clumsy prose with frequent errors in grammar and mechanics that interfere considerably with the reading experience. Sentence construction is consistently unwieldy. Word choice and tone may be consistently inappropriate.8 | Mostly clear prose with occasional errors in grammar and mechanics that may interfere with the reading experience. Sentence construction is serviceable but frequently lacks concision, precision, or variety. Flow between sentences may be inconsistent. Word choice and tone may require significant improvement. | Clear and mostly fluid prose. Occasional minor errors in grammar and mechanics do not interfere significantly with the reading experience. Sentences communicate ideas clearly but could, at times, be more concise, precise, or varied in structure. Minor lapses in word choice and tone. | Clear, fluid prose with minimal errors in grammar and mechanics. Sentences are varied in structure and communicate ideas efficiently and effectively. Word choice and tone are appropriate for writing to a diverse and sophisticated audience.

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