The Raft by Pete Orner

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Journey Back to War The memories of war on a solider will haunt him for the rest of his life, whether he wants it to or not. A veteran will have endless amounts of stories to tell for the rest of his life. The reader takes a journey of a veteran’s struggle in Pete Orner’s story, “The Raft,” by using vivid descriptions, war flashbacks, and irony. In the story, the Grandpa tells a story to his Grandson about killing Japanese soldiers to stress the importance it had on his life. In the flash fiction, there are many uses of vivid descriptions to help the reader relate to the Grandson and what he was experiencing. All of the descriptions work with one’s five senses to make the story come to life. “My grandfather's study is carpeted with white shag, which feels woolly against my bare feet.” (Orner 551) With this description, the reader is able to visualize what the room looks and feels like. Not only is the reader able to visualize the room, they are able to “touch” the carpeting along with the Grandson. “In the crack of sun beneath the door I can see my grandfather’s shoes and white socks. He’s wearing shorts. He’d been practicing his putting in the driveway.” (Orner 552) Even though Grandpa’s in the midst of telling a story about murdering the Japanese, Grandpa is depicted as a normal human being, a grandfather, father, and husband. Someone who will feel terrible about an action made until amends are made. As the reader is imagining a war going on, the “killer” in the story is your caring, insightful, old man who is trying to bond with his Grandson. “We are standing in the dark and looking at each other and the story is the same and different- like last time, except this time his tears come so fast they’re like lather.” (Orner 553) With all of the descriptions, the reader is able to relate and connect with the story on a personal level. Grandpa crying will pull the

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