Kidblog Essay

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Fatima Ajami ELA2 ELEVEN KIDBLOG ESSAY The narrative Eleven by Sandra Cisneros was about a girl named Rachel. It was Rachel’s birthday so she expected everything to be perfect. Until that raggedy sweater came along. Mrs.Price saw a red sweater on the rack and asked who it was for, and then Silvia Salvador had to join. Silvia said “Mrs.Price it’s for Rachel!!!!”Although it wasn’t. Rachel tried saying something but all she can do was say it in a whisper voice. Mrs.Price still thought it was Rachel’s, during class, Mrs.Price saw Rachel put the sweater at the tip of the desk so she forced Rachel to put it on, when Rachel did put it on, she bursted into tears. Then the airhead named Phyllis Lopez came when it was time for lunch and claimed the sweater from Rachel. So then Rachel gave Phyllis the sweater and ran away. After reading Eleven, our class used kidblog. Kidblog is a website that we do our homework on. There are three different classes so three different websites. We post our answers to the question given to us which nobody can see until the teacher checks them and then she posts it. The question we answered this time was “Who do you thing was most at fault regarding the red sweater?” After most of the class posted we collected data from this year and last year to analyze it and that is what we did. Many comparisons stand out when looking at the kidblog data. One comparison is the old and current thought that Rachel was least at fault old data with 5% out of 100% and current with 5% out of 100%. A second comparison is on the current ELA, ELA1 and ELA5 had the same amount of students reply to the kidblog question with 19 students answering. There were lots of comparisons in the kidblog data. After analyzing the kidblog data, I contrasted what I saw. 78 kids in then old ELA classes combined answered and only 59 kids answered in current year so, old ELA

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