Crossing, by Mark Slouka

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Crossing by Mark Slouka By Aksel H. Jepsen Since the dawn of man, fathers have taught their sons about the dangers of nature. Taking them hunting, fishing or hiking helping the young to understand how to survive and overpower the wild. In the short story “Crossing” by Mark Slouka, a father does just this, but something goes terribly wrong. In the story we are introduced to a father who is having a tough time dealing with a divorce. He wants to keep a strong, healthy relationship with his young son. He then thinks he can establish this relationship by doing things with his son which the mother is unable to do; guy-stuff. He chooses to take the young boy river-crossing as he did with his own father when he was young. This adds tradition to the experience as it is just for the father and the son. The narrator in the story is a third person limited narrator who follows the point of view of the father in the story, his thoughts, feelings and flashbacks. This helps the reader focus on just one person, and experience his feelings first-hand making the reader feel closer to the father. The reader experiences the world as the father would, for example seeing the son as a fragile little being that needs protection: “He looked over at the miniature jeans, the sweatshirt bunched beneath the seat belt’s strap, the hiking boots dangling off the floor like weights. “You OK?” he said”. The setting is very dark, cold and wet. Throughout the story the father experiences a lot of water in different states such as mist, rain and the river which, in a way, sets the mood for what is about to happen. The reader does not feel happy at any point in this story; everything is described with dark and ominous words for example the barn is described as a skeleton: “There was something about pitching a tent inside that skeleton”. But the setting is not the only thing in the text giving
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