Buffalo Unbound Essay

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Buffalo Unwrapped Laura Pedersen’s book Buffalo Unbound: a Celebration was a book written more for my parents or a later generation. With all the old history she talks about, her jump around writing techniques and the fact that I’m from buffalo so it’s not new information. These are some of the reasons buffalo unbound was a bad summer read to me. Touching on my first reason, she talks about to much old history. She talks about the blizzard of 77’ which was by far the worst of the worst when it comes to blizzards. The blizzard contained high winds mixed with lots of snow. It lasted from January 28 to February 1. At some points the winds would reach 46 to even 69 miles per hour. At the peak snow drifts reached up to 30ft (9 m). Roads were impassible and snow plows were useless against all the snow. Some 16 of the 25 towns in Eire County declared states of emergency. This was a tragic event but why not talk about something more in our generation, perhaps something we could relate to. Next would have to be her unique was of writing. As I was reading I noticed that most of her sentences tended to run on, or give way to much detail about unnecessary information. Like for example Pederson says, “inside, marble figures of father John Blocher and mother Elizabeth Blocher stand grieving over their dead son, Nelson, while a voluptuous, full-lipped female angel with a come-hither expression gazes down from above.” (49 Pederson). All those adjectives are redundant and ultimately a waste of time. It’s not like this is some long novel were every little detail is a needed to show character growth. Lastly, all of the information from Buffalo Unbound: A Celebration written by Laura Pederson was all about buffalo. Now that’s not necessary a bad thing, but when you’re in my situation in which you are from buffalo and you know about the city and its history and where to get the
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