Ap Language Analysis Essay

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Brad Linden Comp Accel Spitsberg 9/9/11 Memoir Characteristic | Does not meet expectations(1 point) | Meets expectations(2 points) | Exceeds expectations(3 points) | Characters | -Characters do not relate to one another and are not interesting-Reader can not visualize or understand the actions behind the characters | -Characters are interesting and keep the reader involved -Characters connect and relate to one another so the reader understands their relationship | -All meets expectations plus the reader feels emotion toward the characters -The characters are realistic and relatable so the reader feels some sort of emotion toward them | Examples | Black Powerp243Paragraph 1 | Threadp25Paragraphs 1+2 | Ba-chan’s Superstitionp96Paragraphs…show more content…
4 * Too much unnecessary detail on the saints names * Ba-Chan’s Superstition Page 96 Par. 3 * Explains kimi and what she want for graduation * Ba-Chan’s Superstition Page 99 Par. 6 * Explains Chiye * (Explains one person then changes to a new person) 15sec – bad Clarity * Lack of transitions, poor word choice, sentence structure makes story difficult to follow the breaks the flow of the plot 15sec – Ok Clarity * Use of transitions, better word choice, sentence structure making the flow of the story easy to follow 15sec – Good Clarity * Meets Expectation plus exact word choice, sentence structure that sequences ideas with in the paragraph and there are timely transitions between them to make it easy to understand what writer is saying and understand the flow of the
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