Analysis Of Elizabeth Jennings's Absence

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“Absence” by Elizabeth Jennings is a heartbreaking, romantic and very personal poem, in which the speaker is talking directly to someone she misses terribly. She effectively communicates how her emotions were running wild when returning to a place where she had previously met with a lost loved one. Jennings describes how the place she visits has been left unchanged, despite her tragic loss, which it is shown throughout the poem to have left her emotionally shaken and feeling depressed. Absence is a three verse poem, each verse consisting of a clear 5 line structure in which Jennings makes the first, third and fifth lines rhyme in each stanza also the second and fourth line. Jennings generally uses soft, gentle language particularly in the first two stanzas of Absence, but this changes in the final stanza. This…show more content…
In my opinion the descriptors used seem to indicate that the location may be a park or nature path where she would have shared pleasant walks with her lost companion. The appearance of the place Jennings portrays in the first stanza seems to be the same as it was the last time she visited it when the absentee was still with her. This is shown in “Nothing was changed.” Jennings then goes on to say in the next line “The fountains sprayed the usual steady jet”. Jennings word choice of “usual” and “steady” emphasise the continuity of the scene and help her express that everything about this place seems to be exactly the same. I consider the speakers description of the place effective in conveying to the reader that her surroundings are identical to how she recalls them. In the second stanza Jennings begins by saying “ The thoughtless birds that shook out of the trees, singing an ecstasy I could not
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