They'Re Not Your Husband

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They’re not you husband “They’re Not Your Husband” is a short story by Raymond Carver, where he writes about a man named Earl Ober, who is an unemployed salesman, and has a wife called Doreen who is working as a waitress, at a 24-hour coffee shop. One night after his been out drinking as he usually does he goes to see the coffee shop where his wife works. Here he is almost treated like a stranger just like every other costumer by his wife. Two men start talking about his Doreen’s weight and this bothers Earl a lot. He decides to let Doreen know that has a problem with her weight, and she should lose some weight. After this incident she tries to go on a diet but she ends up not eating at all and looking ill. He continues to pressure her, so she would keep on the diet. He ends up in the coffee shop again and tries to “sell” her to a man sitting next to him. The story ends suddenly with Doreen telling everybody that he is a salesman. The total absence of good will between husband and wife is clearly seen straight away: “What are you doing here?’’ Doreen said when she saw him sitting there in the coffee shop and later she says: “Don’t talk to me now. I’m busy.” With only those two sentences you can already see how they’re relationship is. Earl is very embarrassed when two men in business suits are talking about his wife’s weight. So he just sits quietly and hopes the two men won’t see the connection between him and his wife, and that is also why he say goodbye to his wife, when he leaves. It almost seems like he acquires the point of view the two unidentified men have. The troubles of Doreen and Earl’s relationship are also made very clear by this fact, because this clearly shows that if he hasn’t noticed the extra pounds, then he obviously haven’t been looking. Earl has been living his life totally blind and detached, so detached it is almost like he has no
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