Formal commentary on extract from "Age of Iron" -J.M. Coetzee

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Formal Commentary on extract from Age of Iron J.M Coetzee’s age of iron is a short narration of a scene in a struggle or war, which most probably is the South African anti-apartheid struggle . The extract briefly examines the themes of war’s futility, the role of women in society and generational friction through the depiction of the attitudes of a young , wounded freedom fighter towards a woman, most likely his grandmother who is attempting to dissuade him from engaging in this strife. The theme that immediately comes to mind when reading this extract is that of the futility of war. The initial warning sign of violence is the “splashing noises” that the boy makes as he washes his wound. The “splashing noises” could without further explanations have indicated a friendly water fight between two young boys . The mention of a bandage , stitches and a “hospital” however show that the subject ( the boy) has sustained serious injuries , not through play but through an accident or a fight. Later on in the passage , we realize that he has been attacked by a dog, when the woman says, “ A smell coming from him, the smell that must have set the dog off” The very colour of the bandage which is red , reeks of war, as red is the colour of blood. Other devices are used to show this theme.. Especially gripping is the paragraph where she says “Battle, nature’s way of liquidating the weak and providing mates for the strong,” with brutal frankness. This shows that the final victor in war is nature and seeks to portray war simply as a method of population control. Most importantly, only one name , that of “Bheki,” is mentioned in the prose. It is important that he is mentioned only because he is dead. Death , is shown as the final outcome of war, with its finality being emphasized by the woman; “he is never going to leave that hole. Never, never, never” through her

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