Compare I Serve a Mistress by Anthony Munday with Sonnet 130 by William Shakespeare

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I Serve a Mistress is a classic love poem describing all the wondrous things the enamoured writer thinks about his mistress. Sonnet 130 is a parody which is designed to mock the slightly garish and over-flamboyant poems, like the former, which were often written between lovers at the time. Both poems were written by male writers to their mistresses to express their love to them. Both writers use similes to describe the women but Shakespeare’s similes are negative, ‘If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head’, and most of Munday’s are written in a tone of adoration such as ‘more pleasant than the field of flowering grass’. The reason for Shakespeare’s negative tone is to show that, despite her imperfections, their love is just as wonderful as any that has been falsely poeticized and so he does not have to lie to her and over-exaggerate her good points to show his thoughts for her. Shakespeare states ‘I have seen’, meaning the things he talks about are within his experience and not fantasised aggrandisements such as ‘the fairest swan’ and ‘beauty’s fiery pointed beam’ which are unrealistic and exaggerated. Shakespeare also says ‘I grant I never saw a Goddess go’, admitting that he has never seen what he talks about but contrasts his mistress to what he imagines a goddess to be like when he says ‘My mistress when she walks treads on the ground’. Munday’s poem uses metaphors to describe his mistress. He says that his ‘mistress [is] whiter than snow’ and her eyes are ‘brighter than the glass’ whereas Shakespeare varies the structure by saying ‘My mistresses eyes are nothing like the sun’ and then changing the sequence with ‘coral is far more red than her lips’ red’. This means that his poem is more varied and retains the reader’s interest whereas Munday’s poem has greater repetitiveness and is therefore slightly monotonous. The second verse in Munday’s
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