Taking Blindfolded Friend to Carnival

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The Carnival Experience As we walk through the gates of the carnival we immediately stop to take in the aromas and sounds of the exciteful night. I begin telling my friend about the site of bright lights, moving objects, loud colors, and the array of people standing in the ticket lines. Walking through the dusty paths that have been roughed up by several feet I talk to my blindfolded friend about the aroma of all the different foods mixing together. The mouthwatering aromas of fried foods, squeezed lemonade, and powdered sugar being sprinkled on the funnel cakes are almost enough to make us forget about the heat from the humid summer night. The sweet scent of cotton candy being made raises above all the rest since this is my friend’s favorite food. As we continue to the back of the carnival we pass through what I call game alley. Screams, dings, and laughs as people try their luck at various booths. You can hear the competition of the carnival workers as they tempt people to come to their booth. As we walk, I continue to talk about the rides around us. The gleam of lights coming off the roller coaster as it speeds up the track, the screams from passengers as they descend from the highest point on the ride, and the jerking halt when the ride comes to a stop. You can hear the joy in their voices as they talk about the experience while walking down the steep ramp. The three most important things I considered when writing my description was the topic, purpose of my writing, and the context. While writing my description I tried to concentrate on the audience. In this case, I was describing the carnival to my blindfolded friend. Since he could not see, I kept my descriptions on the things he could do. These are smell, taste, and hear. Using descriptive words helped to make his experience more

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