Originally by Carol Ann Duffy Analysis

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Among the many poems that deal with loss, Carol Ann Duffy’s, Originally, stands above the crowd. Duffy takes the reader on a bumpy journey where one adventures into her emotions of identity loss and drastic involuntary changes due to her ‘childhood emigration’. Duffy’s precision is exemplary as she is able to condense her thoughts into three rhythmic stanzas, which are dressed with vivid imagery. The use of several literary devices and poetical techniques emphasizes mood, enhances ideas and furthermore illustrates her uneasy childhood experiences. Duffy begins her journey in what we interpret as a train cart; the speed at which she is travelling is exaggerated as she falls through the hills, giving the feeling of a rough journey. The use of symbolism, “I stared at the eyes of a blind toy” suggests that the blind toy is Duffy’s unforeseen future, which she is frightened of. Duffy’s longing for home is expressed through her brothers with the repetition of “Home, Home”. The bawling brothers depict a sorrow setting as they go against their will, but the children must come to terms with it, as it is vital to surviving change. Duffy’s clever use of enjambment starts off the second stanza slow but soon picks up the pace; further emphasizing this uneasy road that leads to foreign land. Duffy begins to feel ostracized as the one thing that distinguishes her best is considered wrong, her accent. A bit of culture shock is experienced, practices which she deems odd, are acceptable and common. “I want our own country”; it is interesting how Duffy uses the pronouns ‘you’ and ‘I’. She refers to herself in the 3rd person to address her concerns and relate to her readers; she uses the 1st person to express personal statements. Towards the end of the poem, Duffy’s transformation is enormous, almost as though she’s a local. Her accent has adjusted; her culture has
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