Narrative Topic Formation

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Steve Pelon Clint Hale 101 English Composition (03) 14 January 2012 Narrative Topic Formation: The Last Days Spent With My Father The day of September 3, 2010, my father went ill and near death. No one could give or define a proper diagnosis; playing phone tree with family and doctors was failing fast. Questions asked continued to go unanswered, how did this happen, what was the cause, and most importantly what would be the outcome? His blood was being poisoned by something within his own body. What was attempting to take his life? My goal is to write about my father, the findings of his blood poisoning, his following surgery, recovery, and the effects it had on me from the first phone call to my departure from the hospital. At the time I had no idea this would be the last time we were together. This would also be the last time we talked about the past, future, laughed together, and that I not knowing would ever say good bye. As I drove praying almost the entire trip to Great Lakes Naval Station, I remember begging God to spare my father from the pain he had endured. I remember asking him for just a few more years so my father could see his son retire from the Navy after 30 years of service, making him proud that he had raised a good and faithful son. Overall, I want to show respect to my father in a way words and prayers have failed me since the last time I spent with him prior to his passing a few months
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