All That Glistens

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All that Glisters I chose my short story “All that Glistens” because the main character goes through a lot of mixed emotions during the story, she goes from being happy and full of life to it being the worst time in her life. In the short story a young girl called Claire is the main character and during the story her dad has cancer and later on in the story he dies. So in this critical evaluation I’m going to list the range of emotions that Claire goes through, through out the story. At the start of the story Claire notices that there is something wrong with her dad but she didn’t know what. One day when she came back from school she had a real bad felling. She opened the door to find her mum In the living room on the sitee head in hands she called Claire to come over to her, Claire had a bad feeling about it her mum then said that her “Daddy was deid.” In this part of the story Claire feels shocked and sad “but when she said the words the coldness shot through me till ah felt ma bones shiveren” in this quote the emotions that Claire shows are just horrible and she just wants her dad to be back. “Blue veins criss-crossed the back of her haun. Why were veins blue when blood was red” the quote here is saying that here Mums hands had just went cold and that her veins were sticking out with frustration which just made them stand out a lot more in the loss of her husband. “Glisterin and dancing in the sunlight” now this quote is after her dad had died but she wanted to show that she was so happy and still had life in her and she wanted her daddy to be proud of her so she coloured in her hair with gold glitter pens and she added red and green to really make her stand out. This quote also shows that the little tiny specs of glitter really made her feel better and colourful and then after she had put glitter all over her clothes she looked in the mirror and said
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