Women's Argumentative Essay

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Women’s AFL deserves the same publicity as men’s AFL. In the feature article ‘Playing for Keeps’ in the West Australian is a carefully constructed article aimed at all people involved in a sport to persuade them that women’s AFL should be as big as the men’s. the main points the journalist rises are that women don’t want to be like men all they want is to be able to play the game on a scale like men have, the other idea explored is because of the low publicity of women’s AFL it is finically difficult for them to use AFL as full time employment. The journalist accomplishes his/her goal of persuading you that women’s AFL deserves more recognition by appealing to our heart or morals through the use of anecdotal evidence and interviews, the article…show more content…
Women don’t want to be thought of in this sought of way all they want is to be able to play their grand final with an audience like then men’s AFL grand final. The journalist makes us endorse her view on this with the aid of anecdotal evidence and interviews, anecdotal evidence and interviews are used to target our conscience not what we know it right but what we feel is right. Nicole Graves says that many serious sportswomen would love to focus on AFL, but, because there are limited prospects for playing at a top level, they turn their attention to sports with better opportunities for women such as netball, tennis and golf. This anecdote makes us feel sympathy for the girls because who doesn’t want fame and because everyone looks down on women’s AFL they will never be as famous as athletes from other sports. The journalist interview Nicole graves who told him/her that “We want to play the same game but we don’t want to play like blokes… we just want to play” this also makes us feel sympathetic towards the women AFL teams because at the moment they are not being able to play the same game on the same scale. I believe that you can’t tell people to watch women’s AFL because people might come for one game but then they will start comparing it to the men’s and be let down so I believe it is best the women don’t get the same publicity as men

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