Two Sources Of A Men Tone Analysis

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How does the tone of source O compare with the tone of source F? In the two sources, source O & source F I feel that the sources both have an upsetting and negative tone to them however; both sources have positive undertone but more is seen in source o. This is seen throughout the source, possibly to show how little things can make things seem better. In Source O we can see that this negative tone running throughout the source. I was written by General J.E.B Seely who commanded the cavalry brigade. This means that he would have made important decisions for the cavalry that he demanded meaning that to most of the extent would have seen his men being killed. It was published in 1930 from the memoirs of J.E.B Seely so it was a secondary source with primary information in it. Throughout the source the negative tone is seen all the way through it. In the first line it states “I saw at once that the position was desperate, if not fatal” showing just how bad their position was at that point. Instead of being hopeful he has been quite blunt and negative about their position. It…show more content…
Source F is from J.L Jack’s diary showing that it was primary material. It was published after his death in 1964 so it is a secondary source. Jack was a company commander and second in command of the 2nd battalion cameronians showing that he had power with the position that he was in. the Diary was written about the events on the 1st July 1916 with the battle of the Somme which was renowned for being a horrific battle during the first world war. The negative tone in this source Is the fact of how desperate the men actually were. It says that “these men remained still as the dead to avoid drawing fire till darkness should screen there escape” which shows just what the men had to do. They couldn’t move for hours on end otherwise they would have been

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