The Loom Essay

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On the surface the extract “The Loom” by R L Sasaki is a narrative about a mother who spent her time weaving, but it is also a narrative that creates a nostalgic tone and uses an extended metaphor of a loom to explore a mother’s depression and expresses the importance of family. As her children grow up and leave home, she becomes lost for a purpose in life. As a result she starts weaving a “fortress” in which she “seemed to have taken refuge” in order to cope with her emotions. The extended metaphor of the loom is used again to symbolize the mother’s emotions. The mother starts weaving with gray, brown and neutral shades, “all the shades of her life”, to express her depression. To further emphasize the mothers’ sadness, the mother uses “the subdued, muted colours she liked”. Diction in “muted” is interesting, as throughout the extract, the mother never says anything, which seems to suggest that the mother expresses her emotions through weaving. The colors the mother weaves with symbolizes the mothers’ life, and the use of these monotonous colors depicts that it is dull without her daughters, and without her daughters, she has no purpose in life as they no longer need her anymore. However, later throughout the passage, the narrator mentions that the mother could weave “a flash of color” that would not be “picked up” until the fabric was turned over. The two sides of the cloth represented the mothers’ inward and outward personality to the reader. The top side of the fabric which could show “a flash of color, repeated flashes of the color, or never show it at all”, amongst the “brown and neutral shades” she used, symbolizes the mother’s loneliness and misery. Contrastingly, the underside of the fabric that would “reveal long lengths of a color”, represent the mothers suppressed emotions which have been hidden from the “right side of the fabric” and exposed
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