The Journey of Engaging

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Ricardo Carril Maria Kayal English 111 10/3/13 The Journey of Engaging What is higher education? Higher education is beyond high school, at a college or university, learning using critical thinking. In the essay “Are Colleges worth the Price of Admission?” by Andrew Hacker and Claudia Dreifus says that “colleges are staffed by thousands and dedicated to everything from esoteric research to vocational training, and have lost their basic mission to challenge the minds of young people who attends to college” (Hacker and Dreifus, 180). In Mike Rose’s essay “Blue-Collar Brilliance” he says “intelligence is closely associated with formal education the type of schooling a person has, how much and how long most people seem to move comfortably from that notion to a belief that work requiring less schooling requires less intelligence” (Rose, 247). Can you tell who’s more convincing at this point? Andrew Hacker and Claudia Dreifus’s essay is more convincing than Mike Rose’s essay because the Organization of their essay is easy to follow and understand their position and argument, the evidence to support their argument is from their own institution studies and interviews, unlike Mike Rose’s evidence, which includes his personal life experience to support his argument, last but not least, Hacker and Dreifus’s essay was more about them being concerned of other people’s education. The purpose of organizing one’s essay is to prevent confusion with what others have said, to what the author is saying. The first half of Andrew Hacker and Claudia Dreifus essay involves their argument. The second half is the examples that support their argument. In that form they have reader’s attention, not only to guide them to understand their position. Pages 180-183 are proposals of what colleges should do to offer higher education. For example “Engage all students” (Hacker and Dreifus,180)
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