Philip Garridos Home Analysis

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Alyssa Norris Mrs. Alguire English 11 May 13, 2015 I. Introduction A. Opening sentence: Have you ever thought that your life is terrible? Could you imagine losing a child? B. Narrative: Imagine taking off for work at night, not able to kiss your children goodnight because you're running late. You have your husband get your oldest daughter up for school, he sends her up the hill like normal to get on the bus. But instead of getting on the bus, she gets pulled into a van, possibly never to be seen again. C. Background and Details: 1. Her stepfather didn't care much, he forced her to sit in front of the bathroom mirror while eating dinner just to watch herself chew her food. 2. Her parents paid more attention to her baby sister than her. 3. Her…show more content…
Lead up to quote: Phillip Garrido created a special room just for Jaycee to live in. 2. Quote/ Paraphrase: “Jaycee was locked in a makeshift recording studio by her captors, convicted rapist Phillip Garrido and his wife, Nancy Garrido, in the backyard of their home.” 3. Explanation of quote: She was held in a room in the fenced in backyard of the Garridos home. C. Supporting Detail 2: 1. Lead up to quote: Jaycee's life wasn't so easy. 2. Quote/ Paraphrase: “More than 18 years with the Garridos, who fed her countless lies and largely prohibited her contact with the outside world.” 3. Explanation of quote: Jaycee was held captive for eighteen years and gave birth to two children with limited contact to the outside. D. Closing/ Transition Sentence: Many things happened to Jaycee in the eighteen years she was held captive. III. Body Paragraph 2: A. Topic Sentence: The Strange Place- Being held

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