Personal Narrative-Vietnam War

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Indelible Our home was different. It was hurt. Dead. Fumes of a scorched metal rose from the ground. Scatters of military fabrics, compacted bullets, and droplets of red splattered across the land, staining the grass leaves. It wasn’t alive anymore but that didn’t matter. We were foreigners in our own country of Vietnam, but we never knew it until they started detaching us from everything we had. It was theirs now. My Father, My Mother, and I ran across the lifeless plains, for our last ‘chance’. It was a path away from the fields being suffocated by weeds engulfed by towering trees. This ‘chance’ that we were risking everything for was in reality uncertainty and desperation forced onto a damaged boat, for the possibility of a sanctuary…show more content…
It was a constant reminder of everything I was once held. The walls that enclose me were still merely structures that provided neither warmth nor comfort. Families were shuffling across the room like cattle crying in foreign tongues, we were all unwanted here. But they still had each other. This was the sanctuary that I left everything behind for. This was the hostel where people like me stayed. This was Australia. The war was more inviting than this place. Together we were the black sheep of Australia but alone I was the black sheep of this community. I was isolated from the outcasts of the wider community. A muffling cry came from across the room; it was a boy hiding his face into his defiled patched shirt. His Father was taken from him moments ago, by the men in uniform who occasionally came to either cast someone else here or bring them to uncertainty which was outside. I didn’t know him, we never spoke, but we shared a common pain. The loss of a parent was, unfortunately, a familiar feeling that I too have felt. A feeling that has been burnt onto my…show more content…
With a struggling smile she slowly began to take her foot off the metal plate as I ran towards her. ------------------------------- Miracles are for children; and I was no longer a child. This was just a coincidence ... Wasn’t it? She began to notice the others around her and with that her determination dissipated and she surrendered to the floor. Her hands were damaged with age but were also strengthened by war. It’s just a coincidence. They weren’t what I used to hold. Right? She looked up and turned to me, and then I saw. Her eyes were smoky grey and looked at me with suspicion rather than the tenderness I was hoping for. It wasn’t her. She’s not with you anymore, Can’t you just accept that?! I grazed my finger across the scar that carved my skin. It was all I had left of her. All I had left of him. I was so close to her and we were going to be safe. But miracles are for children. I made a bet with Death for this promise land and I had to pay for it with the lives of parents. In the end, it wasn’t a reward it was a punishment. It wasn’t an escape. It was a reminder. Closing my eyes again, I placed my lips against the indelible scar on my hand and suffered through it all again, hand in hand by
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