Odor of Chrysanthemums

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A Blossoming Chrysanthemum Life altering events often lead to changes in a person. A sudden death could trigger some inner reflection, leading to realization. In the short story “Ordour of Chrysanthemums” Elizabeth Bates, the story’s protagonist, embarks on a journey of internal conflict, blame, and finally self-awareness. Lawrence portrays the complexities of Elizabeth through carefully worded dialog, showing the reader at first an impatient mother and an unaffectionate spouse. Only when death finally rears its ugly face, a feeling of warmth trickles to the surface. Oblivious to her situation and only focused on herself, it doesn’t take long for the reader to establish Elizabeth as a morose house wife. The very first time she comes into the story, Lawrence has her “stooping out of the felt-covered fowl house” (2). An erect posture is usually indicative of a person with high self-esteem or confidence. Lawrence soon after described her as a “woman of imperious mein”, as well as having “her mouth closed with disillusionment” (2). After reading only two pages, she’s already a forlorn, domineering, and languid woman; this is only the tip of the ice berg. The first character to interact with Elizabeth is her five year old son, John. John is a black haired small boy donned in an altered man’s attire. His demeanor isn’t typical of a normal five year old. As opposed to being rambunctious and in high spirits; John is portrayed as a sullen defiant boy. “The lad advanced slowly, with resentful, taciturn movement”, Lawrence indicates when Elizabeth beckons for him (3). A clue to her relationship with her husband is given when she converses with John later in the evening “As the mother watched her son’s sullen little struggle with the wood, she saw herself in his silence and pertinacity; she saw the father in her child’s indifference to all but himself”, Lawrence
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