My Parents Are Chinese

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I know the title is not very descriptive, so here is the essay prompt: 1. What lesson/message was this person trying to teach you? 2. What tools did this person use to send the message? Think about how he/she used ethos, logos, and pathos in guiding you. 3. What was the purpose behind this lesson? Why did you need to learn it? Why did this person need to teach it to you? Right place & time: 4. What made the context (time, place, mode of communication) significant? 5. Who were you as the audience at that time, and how/why were you ready to receive the message from this influential person? I met with a faculty reader at my university's writing center. She corrected some grammatical errors and redundancies. However, when I asked for a grade approximation, she said she would give me a C+ because it's to insipid. I'm wondering how to make an essay about learning a lesson interesting. Here is my essay: My parents are Chinese and much like the stereotype about Asian parents. They were fairly strict when raising me, especially my mother. Yes, my mother is similar to the tiger mom, but not to the extent that is publicized. When I was in kindergarten, I was expected to memorize the entire multiplication table up to the tens. As I became older, my responsibilities and workload increased. With the added there also came expectations. High grades were and still are the primary focus of my academic career. Soon my parents had the incentive to start me on violin lessons when I was six. Like any traditional Chinese family, I was expected to excel academically and musically. When I would receive an unsatisfactory result, it was made sure that I understood why it was unacceptable. My mother communicated her message to me via many ways. Sometimes the message would be conveyed through spankings. Other times the lesson would be proclaimed through lectures and

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