Miss Rosie By Lucille Clifton Analysis

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Lesson 2 journals Journal 2.1 I feel like adding sensory details to any piece of writing, pushes it to a whole new level. In "Miss Rosie" Lucille Clifton uses the lines "sitting, surrounded by the smell / of too old potato peels" and "you wet brown bag of a woman.” Once I start reading this, of course I immediately begin imagining the smells of rotting potatoes. I don’t just picture potatoes in my mind, but rather smell and see this descriptive image of rotting potatoes. When she talks about a wet brown bag, I don't just see a brown bag but rather imagine the wet, slimy, clingy texture it would have if I touched it. Sensory details are a way into our minds. It creates a movie in our heads using all of our senses. Journal 2.2 When I was 12 years old, I lost my grandpa to cancer. He was my mom’s dad and was super close to our family. When he died, it felt like someone had jabbed their hand into my chest, ripped out my heart with their fingers, and left me to bleed out. I lost one of my best friends, a person who was always there for me no matter what happened. At first, I refused to believe it. I went outside and shut myself off from everyone. I closed off my feelings and just laid there. I thought I would never be happy again. The memorial…show more content…
Her use of sensory details is impeccable. The line “think of your hands, fingertips on the soft hair” not only makes me think about touching someone’s hair but makes me feel my smooth fingers brushing through soft silky hair. She uses a great simile when comparing the men’s eyes to the night sky. She shows her use for metaphors when comparing her mother to a white dove. My favorite would have to be the simile just because I can clearly picture in my mind that the eyes of this man can look like the dark black night sky. I don’t have a least favorite type of figurative language in the piece. I feel like she did an amazing

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