Let Steroids Into The Hall Of Fame Analysis

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When writing an essay there are many things that the writer has to make sure are included in the paper to make it successful. One of the important parts is deciding which point of view the story will be the most successfully told in. Another very big part is a thesis statement; this is the most important part of writing a paper. Having an obvious thesis statement or an implied thesis is a decision people have to make. Most academic essays students write have an obvious thesis, and most stories or professional papers have an implied thesis. Also the structure of the story itself, deciding where in the story you want the climax is going to be, how you want to word everything, and how to sequence the events to make the paper most effective. These…show more content…
This piece is effective because it is full of statistics about the problem, and is stating the facts… not personal opinions so there is no way he is wrong. If he wrote it as a story in first person point of view like an experience he went through, people might not have sympathy for him, so it would not have been a good paper. Therefore putting this kind of story in third person point of view was good because he had somewhere to go with it and he could prove to people it was a real…show more content…
It is written in a first person point of view. Writing with this approach was more effective in this story because it gave a more personal account in the message it is trying to give the reader. It allowed the reader to experience the problem on a personal level through another person’s eyes as opposed to listing facts like the first story did the whole time. Writing it in a first person point of view made it easier for the audience to identify with the author and side with what he is trying to persuade us to believe. We tend to take the story to heart more when it is written in this point of view. This is effective because writing in first person made you feel like there actually is a problem and it needs to be fixed. The author does this in order to get the reader to side with him, and what he is trying to

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