How Does Carol Ann Duffy Use Metaphor in Valentine?

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The poem Valentine is an extended metaphor about how the unromantic properties of the onion fit the notion of love. Each individual stanza shows the different phases of love and how it begins with all the best intentions yet gradually changes into misunderstandings and violence. This is shown in the poem at the start as it says “it promises light” showing that it will eventually lead to something positive as the light represents a positive connotation. However towards the end of the poem it is shown to be quite violent as Duffy says “Lethal” which connotates something deadly or fatal that usually causes death therefore portraying the negative contrast to the poem. The structure of the poem has been manipulated to emphasise Duffy's key points. We have the use of a form of dialogue as the narrator is speaking to her lover however he does not reply showing a one sided viewpoint of their relationship. This is used to express the perspective of the narrator and invites the reader in to question the idea of their relationship and the fact that she presents her lover with an onion which would be considered as a ridiculous gift to give somebody that you love. Duffy presents the ridiculous idea of the onion in the poem as she says “I give you an onion.” This is immediately presented as a strange idea as an onion is usually seen as a repellent and a very un-romantic object so the fact that she is giving this to her lover could connotate a negative, unloving relationship between the narrator and her lover. On the other hand, it could show that the relationship between the narrator and her lover is not seen as the stereotypical ‘type’ of love as she uses the unromantic gift of an onion to convey her love and to show that the onion consists of several layers which could connotate the type of relationship the narrator and her lover has and that their relationship is unique.
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