An Analysis Of Danyel Smith's Dreaming America

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Kayla Nguyen Mr. Stewart AP Language & Comp. 11 September 2014 Dreaming America Ms. Hip Hop tells us about stereotypical New York and California today. Are they really all they are cracked up to be? Many people, like Ms. Hip Hop, dream of going to these places because of their story, but don't know what the real legacy behind each of them are. 1. Danyel Smith begins with asking rhetorical questions that set up the essay. Asking about the birthplace of hip hop culture and if it's New York, these question start to get the reader to recall their knowledge on the subject and conjure up an answer. Smith continues with creating an extended metaphor between California and New York. First explaining the many attractions that bring Ms. Hip Hop…show more content…
Smith uses “Ms. Hip Hop, generic girl fan” to comment on music because New York is the “birthplace” of hip hop. She also uses it show the difference between New York and California by telling us what Ms. Hip Hop likes in California, “California has its glories, and it holds on tight to its trophies -- the Eagles, Sly and the Family Stone, Jefferson Airplane, Tower of Power” (para. 5). 3. The audience are people that believe in the stereotypical ideas of what New York and California are like and what they have done for hip hop. People knowledgeable about those who were influential in music, particularly in hip hop and bebop. 4. Smith finds many rhetorical devices that grabs our attention i make us catch his message. Firstly, Smith makes many allusions to many different people such as Queen Latifah. Later on, Smith uses alliteration when she says, "... West is where folks are waking..." (para. 6). This catches our attention so we can make sure we get the message. Finally, she uses personification. She says, "Speech wants the old life" (para. 9). This makes us see speech for something else. Smith's use of rhetoric makes us learn her overall message that New York and California aren't all they’re cracked up to…show more content…
Smith gives us examples between city and country life by using New York as the city and California as the country. “The buildings are older, the streets fumes stronger, every other car is a taxi.” (para. 7). She tells us that New York is tight and everyone is busy getting to one place after another. “California piles on big-city makeup in L.A. and Oakland, San Diego and San Francisco -- but really, the place is spread out like a big cabbage farm, like the far-flung desert it is.” (para. 7). California is a big state, which makes it the opposite of New York, empty. It’s full of rich people who gets whatever they want, so obviously they would know hip hop music. 6. “It’s where DJ Scott LaRock died and Slick Rick went to prison. Where Run found Christ and Griff got dismissed.” (para. 3). The purpose of this reference between hip hop and the musicians are to explain with evidence that they’re all related to New York. It’s believable because in the second paragraph, it gives us many examples such as, “...the place where the seed took hold? Where the rhymes first flowed and a culture took form?
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