Diction: Compare And Contrast The Writing Style Of Bradstreet And Edwards

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Sammie Burks Period. 1 Honors English 11 September 11th, 2013 Literary Term Handbook Diction Formal: Style of speaking or writing as dependent upon choice of words Own: the way a person speaks or writes by the words they choose to use Examples: 1. “That laid my goods now in the dust. Yes, so it was, and so ‘twas just” (Bradstreet 29). 2. “Your wickedness makes you as it were heavy as lead, and to tend downward with great weight and pressure toward hell;” (Edwards 47). Both Bradstreet and Edwards diction are based off of the lives or situations they are in. Bradstreet being her puritan based life and Edwards being very angry and vengeful toward the listeners of his sermon or the “unpure” puritans. Concrete Formal: Constituting an…show more content…
“The devil is waiting for them, hell is gaping for them, the flames gather and flash about them, and would fain lay hold on them, and swallow them up; the fire pent up in their own hearts is struggling to break out” (Edwards 46). 2. “Of dried codfish, the green plantains hanging in stalks like votive offerings” (Cofer 1079). Both quotes are examples of concrete language because they are using words to create a real or true physical feeling for the reader/listeners. Abstract Formal: Expressing a quality or characteristic apart from any specific object or instance, as justice, poverty, and speed Own: When there is a element that isn’t a specific object, detail, or feeling Examples: 1. “And uncovenanted, unobliged forbearance of an incensed god” (Edwards 47). 2. “That fearful sound of ‘Fire!’ and ‘Fire’” (Bradstreet 29) ! The first quote is expressing the word incensed which means angered or enraged and the second quote is showing how the dreadful word fire strikes fear into…show more content…
“My Betty not goin’ die” (crucible 8)… 2. “No, no, sir, I don’t truck with no devil” (Crucible 43)! Both of these quotes are uses of colloquial writing because neither uses formal writing structure but does use illiterate slang. Syntax Formal: The arrangement of word and phrases to create well-formed sentences in a language Own: A proper way to write a sentence in different languages Examples: “Whose hearts are mountains, roots are trees, it’s they shall cry hello to the spring what if a dawn of a doom of a dream bites this universe in two” (Cummings 602). 2. “(I do not know what it is about you that closes and opens; only something in me understands the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)” (Cummings 603). In quote one Cummings uses syntax to explain the human lives more thoroughly through environmental objects. In quote two syntax is used to explain the love and strength this person feels for another like a rose opening and closing. Convoluted Formal: Of an argument, story, or sentence; extremely complex and difficult to follow Own: A sentence, story, or such that is complicated to understand Examples: 1. “What if a much of which of a wind gives the truth to summer’s lie” (Cummings
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