Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith and Cloudstreet

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Distinctively Visual Speech Gambling. Poor Working conditions. Drinking. Strength. Good morning teachers. These aspects are explored through either the excerpts of ‘Cloudstreet’, ‘The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith’ or the advertisement of ‘Nolan’s Cheddar Cheese.’ Distinctively visual images are used by the producers of each text to convey the context of the world being depicted. ‘Cloudstreet’ by Tim Winton written in 1991 focuses on gambling and poor working conditions while ‘The Cant of Jimmie Blacksmith’ by Thomas Keneally written in 1970 explores the use of alcohol. Finally the concept of strength is portrayed through the advertisement of ‘Nolan’s Cheddar Cheese’. Through the excerpt ‘Cloudstreet’, Winton uses the technique of a metaphor to effectively highlight distinctively visual images to his audience, reinforce the role of women during the time of World War Two and the impacts of gambling. Through the line ‘the breeze comes through the window and stops the scene from turning into a painting’, the audience understands the awkwardness shared between Dolly and Rose. The metaphor clearly displays the stillness and softness of the hospital room where the mother and daughter do not speak. There is only a breeze blowing which avoids the room from becoming completely still. From this, it is evident that during that period, women stayed home to care for their children and perform home duties, while the men worked to provide for their families. This is what contributed to the actions of Dolly when she slept with another man as she attempted to acquire the money which her husband had irresponsibly gambled. The distinctively visual techniques of language and characterisation in ‘Cloudstreet’ convey the world of poor working conditions. The harsh working conditions which were faced by male employees are demonstrated through the use of descriptive and colloquial
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