'Brothers' Poem by Andrew Forster

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‘Brothers’ is a poem about 3 brothers aged 6, 9 and 10 years going out to catch a bus by themselves. Forster shows a contrast in the familial relationships that the persona (the 9-year-old) has with his older brother and his younger brother through language, structure and form. The poem is an account of the 9-year-old boy and is written almost more like a story than a poem as it is in past tense: “I looked at Paul.” The use of past tense and first person throughout the poem gives the impression that this is a memory of Forster’s, which can be furthered by the use of second person: “While you skipped beside us”. The variety in grammatical person – “I”, “Paul”, “you” – suggests that Forster is aiming this memory at one brother but not the other. Forster seems to have chosen vocabulary that shows that his relationship with his younger brother isn’t very good. The quote “saddled with you” supports this as it suggests that he sees his brother as a burden or an extra weight, and therefore doesn’t enjoy spending time with him. Another quote to support this is “your ridiculous tank top”. The word “ridiculous” is not often associated to simple items of clothing like a tank top, making it seem like quite an extreme adjective to use. From this, we can infer that the persona used to look for reasons to separate himself from his little brother. However, his older brother, Paul, and the persona seem to get on quite well. One aspect of their relationship can be shown in the quote: “His smile, like mine, said”. From the clause, “like mine”, we can surmise that the two older brothers had some sort of close connection because they could communicate with one shared smile. There are also a number of quotes linking the persona to Paul, his elder brother, such as: “me and Paul”, “we must stroll the town” and “we chased”. The repeated pronoun, “we”, and the phrase, “me and Paul”,
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