Audubon And Dillard: The Beauty Of Birds

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Michellae Brown Ms. Horton AP Lit. And Comp. Rhetorical Essay (Final) The beauty of birds in flight is all in the eye of the beholder. Two experiences of bird watching by Audubon and Dillard differ, one is objectively descriptive while the other is poetic in nature. In Audubon’s essay, he uses “objective” diction to create impartial and precise aspects of the birds in flock, with words such as “extreme beauty” and “immense legions.” He uses words such as these to not compare the birds to actual life, but to describe the image he sees and how it makes him feel. In contrast, Dillard’s essay use a more “poetic” command of language to compare the birds with words such as “loosened skein” and “unravel.” The contrast between these two different…show more content…
Audubon uses loose, complex sentences to describe the entertaining birds. One can read, “In these almost solid masses, they dated forward in undulating and angular lines, descended and swept close over the earth with inconceivable velocity, mounted perpendicularly so as to resemble a vast column, and, when high, were seen wheeling and twisting within their continued lines which then resembled the coils of a gigantic serpent.” Near the middle of the passage Audubon extends his complex sentences with lengthy details following the semi-colon; stating, “The air was literally filled with pigeons; the light of noon-day was obscured as by an eclipse; the dung fell in spot, not unlike melting flakes of snow’ and the continued buzz of wings had my tendency to lull my sense to repose.” Differing from the unending long sentences, Dillard presented short and simple syntax using parallelism sentences such as “They gathered deep in the distance, flock sifting into flock, and strayed towards me, transparent and whirling, like smoke.” One can also read at the end of the story, “Could tiny birds be sifting through me right now, birds winging through the gaps between my cells, touching nothing, but quickening in my tissues?” Audubon “pushed himself to the edge” with sentences going on to long, as Dillard simply “cut to the point” with her Compact sentence

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