Analysis On Rite Of Passage/Not Finished

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The poem “Rite of Passage” is a poet’s account of the simple nature of man and his need to feel powerful. Sharon Olds uses a first narrative voice to describe the atmosphere of her son’s birthday, while incorporating subtle hints of what she expects will be many more battles in the young man’s life. The relationship of these battles is connected through the needs of men to engage each other and the world of meaningless and deadly wars. Right from the beginning of the poem one is able to determine the setting. Old’s creates a very vivid picture of a young boy’s birthday party and begins to describe the scene, “As the guests arrive at my son's party they gather in the living room—“(1-2) The mother of the birthday boy begins to examine the character traits of the six to seven year old party guests. She conveys them as “short men, men in first grade/with smooth jaws and chins.” (3-4) At this moment she highlights the fact that their faces are smooth, but contradicts it with the idea that they are men. While contradicting the idea that these six to seven year old boys are men, the speaker portrays that these “men” do not have the ability to sit still. She then illustrates them, “Hands in pockets, they stand around/jostling, jockeying for place, small fights” (5-6). The mannerisms of the young men in the poem Later on, she describes their behavior in terms of predominantly male professions. The children recognized as men “They clear their/throats a lot, a room full of small bankers,/they fold their arms and

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