A Comparison Between John Steinbeck's 'Of Mice And Men'

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The point is concise (normally one sentence) and explains what Steinbeck is trying to achieve and the method he is using to achieve it POINT EVIDENCE The evidence is well selected – only the necessary words are given instead of whole sentences or paragraphs. Evidence may be embedded within a sentence. The quote has been selected carefully to make sure there is an opportunity to write in depth about the language used. EXPLAIN •Should be the longest and most detailed part of the paragraph •Should refer directly to the language in the quote •Should discuss the impact of specific words and phrases on the reader •Might, where appropriate, link the point you have made to the novel’s historical context or themes •Might, where appropriate, link the quote you have analysed to other parts of the novel to which it is similar or with which it contrasts Steinbeck often describes Lennie by comparing him to an animal. “ Behind him walked his opposite, a huge man, shapeless of face, with large, pale eyes, with wide, sloping shoulders; and he walked heavily, dragging his feet a little, the way a bear drags his paws”. Lennie is described as an animal because he is big and strong. He is also not…show more content…
The explanation in paragraph 2 is more effective because… Discuss with your partner: Analyse the following quotes, explaining what they show about Lennie’s character. You do not have to use the whole quote – you should select the language you think is necessary. Slowly, like a terrier who doesn’t want to bring a ball to its master, Lennie approached, drew back, approached again. George snapped his fingers sharply, and at the sound Lennie laid the mouse in his hand. “I’d pet ‘em, and pretty soon they bit my fingers and I pinched their heads a little and then they was dead – because they was so little” They sat by the fire and filled their mouths with beans and chewed mightily. A few beans slipped out of the side of Lennie’s mouth. George gestured with his spoon. AfL
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