William Golding Desciption Of Fire

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What writing techniques does William Golding use the paragraph to make his descriptions vivid and effective? Golding uses many writing techniques to create in an impressive way a vivid image of the fire. First he uses personification `’small flames stirred at the bole of a tree and crawled away through leaves and brushwood.’ The writer creates a vivid image of the early progression of the flame as babe crawling, who has not yet begun to walk thus giving an impression to the reader that the fire has just started and has a life of its own. He then immediately follows up in his description by using a simile. ‘one patch touched a tree trunk and scrambled up like a bright squirrel’. Undeniably giving a similarity of the sudden change to the speed of the fire from crawling away like a innocent babe to the likeness of a red squirrel scrambling up the tree. Admittedly he creates the impression that the fire which was humble at the beginning has gone wild and threatening ,here the author again emphasises on the fire having a life of its own because like a squirrel it can’ scramble ‘up a tree and is of a bright colour. Interestingly , the author uses metaphor ’the squirrel leapt on the wings of wind and clung to another tree, eating downwards ‘. He compared the fire to a red squirrel that has similar characteristics to the fire, it moves quick it can use the wind to leap to another tree and known of being vicious this is shown by ‘’eating downwards’’. The uses of Alliteration here ‘on the wings of wind’ he may be tried to focus the reader’s attention on the agility of the fire at that stage. In his description Golding made an excellent portrait of the fire in using writing technique such as personification, simile and metaphor ‘the whole paragraph seems to be ablaze by the overwhelming spread and the immense heat of the

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