Web Referencing Program Research Memo

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Web Conferencing Programs Research Memo Carrie Warnecke Eng 221 April 14, 2014 Crystal Hicks | Kudler Fine Foods | Memo To: Brenda Wagner From: Yvonne Reynolds Re: Training for new cash registers The new NCR RealPOS 30 terminals are going to be installed in six weeks. While the vendor has training materials and will train our trainer, we need to determine the best way to train the cashiers in the three stores, the management team in each store and the computer support specialists. Please have someone evaluate the various means we could use to deliver the training and make a recommendation of how we should proceed. Thank you. This memo from Kudler Fine Foods is organized in a very well written manner by the author. The only needs for improvement I can see would be that it should be broken up into different sections to make it better…show more content…
I can't see any room for improvement for the tone of the memo as it is in a formal tone already and would be business appropriate. The writing style of the memo is somewhat informal and relaxed. Some suggestions for the writing style would be to write it in a more formal tone so that it could be distributed among the other employees of the company and the managers that will be involved in the training. My reaction to the memo was that it was well written and informative, but could have been written in a more formal tone to be able to be distributed to everyone who would be involved in the training. I think that a memo such as this could be very helpful in distributing information about training to employees within a company and to inform them of the upcoming training and upgrades. By writing a formal memo about training and upgrades it will keep everyone in the company
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