Two Methods of Losing Weight Essay

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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Two Methods of Losing Weight Paula Barbeau Com/155 University Composition and Commination I Hector Escalante The two methods of losing weight that I am going to present are exercising and eating more healthy. Eating healthier and taking smaller portions along with exercise are very important in losing weight. You may also incorporate some sort of exercise whether it is walking around the block or walking on the treadmill at the gym. Obesity comes with many [Only commercial shipments and real estate are measured in lots. To use "a lot of" to mean "many," "much," or "a large amount" is a colloquialism (not universally clear). Use another term.] health issues like diabetes, although you can have diabetes and not be overweight as well. According to the US Department of Health and Human Services, being [Doctoral rule (but good advice for any academic writer)--If not a noun (as in "human being"), the word "Being" is hard to imagine; it means "existing." Try to rewrite this without using "being"--with action words like "attending," "working," "living,"

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