Thesis Essay

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4 Steps to an Effective Thesis Richard McGowan SRQ - Statement Restates Question SRQO - Statement Restates Question Organizes SRQOA - Statement Restates Question Organizes Analyzes HSRQOA - Hook Statement Restates Question Organizes Analyzes 2003 AP World History Compare and Contrast Essay Prompt Compare and contrast the roles of women in TWO of the following regions during the period from 1750-1914. East Asia Sub-Saharan Africa Latin America Western Europe SRQ- Student Sample The role of women during 1750-1914 in East Asia was both different and similar to the role of women in Western Europe. + Statement + Chooses and compares two regions + Correct time period - Simple statement - No organization - Poor use of vocabulary SRQO – Student Sample Between 1750-1914 the role of women in East Asia and Western Europe remained constant remained both socially and politically, but in Western Europe the role of women changed economically. + Statement + Chooses and compares two regions + Correct time period + Provides organization (PERSIAN) - Vocabulary SRQOA Student Sample As a result of the industrialization of Western Europe between 1750-1914 the economic role of women changed however, their social and intellectual roles remained the same in both East Asia and Western Europe. + Statement + Chooses and compares two regions + Correct Period + Provides Organization (PERSIAN) + Basic analysis of what caused the role of women to change + Acceptable vocabulary HSRQOA As mankind adopted the agrarian lifestyle and the nomads settled into a sedentary way of life women lost their economic equality and would not regain it until the Industrial Revolution brought women back to work place. Between 1750-1914 women in Western Europe

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