The Fall of a City

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General statement: Teddy inspires us by the ways he coups with reality by creating and artificial world. Claim 1: Teddy completely immerses himself in Upalia. Claim 2: Teddy controls his parental, social and anger issues. Claim 3: Teddy faces reality. Thesis statement: In life people create artificial reality for themselves instead of facing the reality they live in. Body paragraph one: Topic sentence: Teddy completely immerses himself in Upalia. Support: In the beginning of the story Teddy is deeply involved in Upalia and has nothing to stop him he gives detailed descriptions on how Upalia is build and he explains the relationship between the two kingdoms. Evidence: "The armies of the Emperor Kang of Danova were attacking the fortifications on the Upalian frontier" (T.F.O.A.C.) Body paragraph two: Topic sentence: Teddy controls his parental, social and anger issues. Support: In the story The Fall Of A City the main character Teddy establishes control over many of his issues which include Parental, Social and Anger by creating an artificial reality named Upalia. Evidence: "Blinking, he shifted his position and transferred his attention to the things that lay around him on the floor. In the centre of the room a fort and a palace, painstakingly constructed from corrugated cardboard cartons"( T.F.O.A.C.) Body paragraph three: Topic sentence: Teddy faces reality. Support: In the ending of the story The Fall Of A City the main character Teddy faces reality when his uncle discovers the Kingdome of Upalia which is a paper doll house build from cardboard, after this incident Teddy calmly goes and destroys the Kingdome of Upalia by ripping it into little pieces. Concluding paragraph: Restated thesis: In life people create artificial reality for themselves instead of facing the reality they live in. Claim 1: Teddy completely immerses himself in
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