'the Dromedary' - Archibald Young Campbell Commentary

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In this poem, the narrator is reflecting upon his visit to a zoo, where he was surprised by the disrespect toward a dromedary in a cage, and the ability of the animal to hold its head high and not let their mockery affect his pride and self-worth. The narrator is the first person subjective, as a person who has visited the zoo. The crowd of visitors at the zoo that day do not give the dromedary the respect an animal in captivity deserves. The zoo is cheerful, but no one is admiring the animals, all staring blankly in “vulgar wonder”, mocking his appearance as he has a skin disease due to inadequate care at the zoo, and his shape to which they are not accustomed. However, the dromedary is unmoved by this disrespect, and mirrors their superior attitude, managing to maintain the majesty of his land (assumed Middle East/North Africa/India). This is a Petrarchan sonnet, formulated into a regular iambic pentameter with a regular rhyming pattern (ABBAABBACDEDED). It follows the Petrarchan structure: the octet describes the zoo and has a mocking tone because of the attitude of the crowd, and the sestet describes the camel with a respectful tone as it contains many expressions to show the dromedary’s pride. This is a descriptive poem: it expresses a memorable description of the zoo and the camel, while providing vivid imagery of both. However, there is little use of literary devices, apart from “hump and hairy” and “head was high” which are alliterations that reflect the hushed voices of the crowd, because the camel is not paying attention to the comments. This lack of significant literary devices is due to the poem emphasizing the way this situation presents itself (visual imagery). This poem is very effective in conveying the feeling of respect toward the camel, mingled with pity for its being poorly treated. We are reminded that wild animals are not meant to be
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