Song for Last Year's Wife

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Song for last year’s wife A) Explore how Patten conveys his thoughts and feelings about loss and relationship in ‘song for last year’s wife’ The poet conveys his thoughts and feelings through the tone. The tone is mournful and subdued. We see this in the first stanza, Patten starts the poem by mentioning the name of who the poem is directed to ‘Alice this is my first winter of waking up without you …’ we have a direct sense of sympathy here because we understand that ‘Alice’ is his wife and she is no longer with him ‘ without you’ , furthermore the use of the broad metaphor ‘winter’ gives the reader the idea that the poet has grown cold and dead since the wife left , conversely we could also say that the season is mirroring his emotions and feelings . Furthermore we also see that the poet says ‘perhaps not even conscious of our anniversary’ the tone here, makes the reader think that the poet is angry and sad at the same time which creates a contrast between the sadness that he feels at the beginning of the poem ‘First winter of waking up without you’ and the anger or disappointment that he feels because perhaps she’s not ‘Even conscious of their anniversary’ Furthermore we see that the Patten uses imagery to hint his feelings to the reader ‘the earth is still as hard’ this gives the reader an idea that he has buried her and she is no longer alive, and that’s what causing the melancholy in his narrative tone and language used in the poem, furthermore he says ‘the same empty gardens exist’ this suggest to the reader that the gardens are impersonating him and it is him that still feels empty and lost. We also see that the poem is not divided in to stanzas we could suggest that the feelings and thoughts of the poet are all over the place and he doesn’t stop thinking about her about ‘Alice’ Furthermore the port says ‘Love had not the right to walk out of me’,
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