Smarthinking's E-Structor Research Paper

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Smarthinking's E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking's OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hello, Andrea. This is Marie E. and, I will be your e-structor who will help you in your paper. Shall we start now? *Strengths of the essay: I like that you included dialogues in your work. Here’s an example: “Caitlin called and said, “My Mom’s dead!” Dialogues are important because they help your readers visualize your experience. Good job, Andrea! *Andrea 6568721 has requested that you respond to the Main Idea/Thesis: You can still work on developing your main idea by making sure that it expresses clearly what your narrative is about. Remember that the purpose of a narrative is to tell a story. It is about a series of events, but you have to remember that those events must revolve around a single idea. Have a look at your current main idea below: Through writing about our friendship…show more content…
I still have not been able to bring myself to say good bye to Angelique, my best friend. She passed away April 14, 2013 from a drug overdose. I have yet to find closure with the loss of my friend. I will attempt to describe the strength and closeness of our friendship and see if I can’t let her go. I want to find closure to the loss of my best friend, and finally find a way to say goodbye to her. Through writing about our friendship and who she was to me, I think I will be able to find the closure and say goodbye to her in a meaningful way that will allow me to move on with my life without her in it. [What is the overall theme of your story? Remember that the main idea needs to present the overall idea of your

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