Personal Narrative: My Victorious Scar

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htngvn Per.4 tfgjnm j September 07 2011 gfhn My Victorious Scar. When I was a freshman, I decided that my sport would be running. I wanted to do running because my brother ran varsity and I as well wanted to be varsity. He once told me that I couldn’t beat his time that he got for track or cross-country. What he had said got me kind of furious and sad. Cross-country started and our first race was coming up I thought that I would get a good time. Turned out to be that I didn’t get the time I wished for because it was my first year. Through out the year I couldn’t get close to his time at every race. Sadly, Cross-country ended and track season was coming up. I had taught to myself that 1 mile wouldn’t be…show more content…
As soon as the gun went off I got in the middle of the pack trying to make it to the finish line. I was at my last lap when I was coming around the corner and I see the clock and it read 5:50. I got disappointed in myself. So all I had left is to sprint to the finish line. Coming to the finish line I pushed myself to hard and fell over the finish line. I had made myself a big cut on my knee. It was embarrassing for me that I knew I didn’t beat my brothers time. The following day, the times were up and I checked mine and I got 6:01. I thought to myself that I had tried this whole season and that it was my first year. I told my brother my time and he said that it was okay it was my first year. When track ended I thought to myself that I still had 3 more years. This sophomore year I’m really committing myself to get a good time and beat my freshmen year time. A race is coming up this week and I hope I get a good time so I can make my brother proud. This year should be a good year for me because I have been practicing all summer long. One thing that I will do is remember the scar for something that I tried and never gave up
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