paper but you really left the reader hanging out to dry. For your concluding paragraph, just make sure you offer a satisfying sense of closure from the reader perspective and also emphasize but not over exaggerate the main point or lesson of your commentary. Other than that, your paper nicely done!
Tastes Decreases Demand – Decreases Supply – No Change COMMENTARY COVER SHEET Economics commentary number: | #2 | | | Title of extract: | Inflation: It’s Worse Than You Think | | | Source of extract: | Time Magazine | | | Date of extract: | May 2, 2005 | | | Word count: | 674 | words | | | Date the commentary was written: | November 29, 2011 | | | Section of the syllabus to which the commentary relates: | Section: 2.3 | | | Candidate name: | Nico
Commentary My piece of writing is intended to inform the reader about euthanasia, representing the main points of what it is and both positive and negative arguments presented in an unbiased way so that the reader can make up their own mind on whether they agree or disagree with the issue. The genre of my writing is in the form of an information booklet shown through features such as headings, images, coloured sections and arranged text. It is aimed at people with a general interest of ethical issues
Commentary - Stealing. The source text for my transformation is “ Stealing” by Carol Ann Duffy. I chose this poem as from the beginning it already draws in the reader and carries on doing so, right through to the end. I changed the source text into a detective novel as it shown a mysterious field through out the poem which can be followed up through out my transformation. I thought this poem suited the detective genre as it has a quite sadistic theme within it as throughout the poem it has
1 COMMENTARY: BRAVE NEW WORLD. ALDOUS HUXLEY. NEW YORK: HARPER AND ROW, 1932. 311PP. I am sure Aldous Huxley’s “Brave New World” raised some eyebrows back in the thirties when it was first published. It is a science fiction novel set 600 years in the future. It is about a world that no longer consists of families, babies are engineered in test tubes, taking a drug known as Soma to put your mind on holiday is an everyday relaxation method, sexually promiscuous behavior is not only expected,
Che’ Ross Community Health March 6, 2012 Chapter 5 Commentary Everything thus far has tied together, and I feel this chapter on health promotion adds to it. Epidemiology would assist with health promotion because there is statistics and facts to help health organizations approach the problem and helps them decide on how best to confront and present the information to the public. Without health promotion a lot of things would go unknown such as the flu vaccine – if it had not had such a prominent
GUIDELINES FOR WRITING A COMMENTARY Every student must produce a portfolio of three commentaries based on articles from published news media. The articles must be from a newspaper, a journal or the internet, but must not be from TV or radio broadcasts. The article on which the commentary is based should be in the same language as the commentary. Each commentary must explain the linkages between the article & economic theory taken from the section of the syllabus on which the article is
Narrative Commentary Draft – Mocking Bird The narrative I have chosen to write about is based on a theme of love and loss inspired by personal past experiences. It is written in first person from the perspective of the main character- a young woman in an everyday struggle after her mother is diagnosed with Alzheimer’s. Throughout the narrative, the author often refers back to past times to convey the strong relationship between herself and her mother. I have used this technique to fulfil my purpose
Shooting an Elephant Commentary “Shooting an Elephant” written by George Orwell tells the tale of his journey in Burma also known as modern day Myanmar. Orwell was a prolific writer who was born in India but is a British citizen. He wrote several fine short stories which are based on his experiences in Burma. His most famous works, both of which warn of the dangers of totalitarianism, are novels “Animal Farm” (1945) and “Nineteen Eighty-Four” (1949). This story came alone when he was serving the
| Shilpa Paliwal | SOURCE OF THE ARTICLE | The Jakarta Posthttp://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2014/01/04/hotels-raise-fb-price-after-lpg-price-hike.html | TITLE OF THE ARTICLE | Hotels to raise F&B price after LPG price hike | DATE OF ARTICLE | 4 January, 2014 | DATE WRITTEN | 6 January, 2014 | WORD COUNT (650-750 WORDS) | 720 | COMMENTARY NUMBER | 01 | AREA OF THE SYLLABUS YOUR COMMENTARY RELATES TO (TICK THE ONE WHICH IS MOST RELAVENT) | * Section 1: Introduction to Economics