Limbo Essay

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Describe at least ONE striking or powerful use of language in EACH text Explain how the writer used language to show you an important idea in EACH text. Note: “Language” might be choice of vocabulary, imagery, style, dialogue, or narrative point-of-view. “Limbo” written by Edward Kamau Brathwaite and “Half-Caste” written by John Agard both contain the powerful use of language which plunge the reader into the world of the poem. Both poets employ non-standard English and this technique helps us to paint a picture of the scene; it emphasises the poet’s tone and allows us to identify and empathise with the poet’s message. In “Limbo” Brathwaite writes in the West Indian Creole dialect that slaves spoke in. By using a dialect, the poet is able to present the slaves’ point of view. The voice of the slaves comes through and adds authenticity to the scene the poet is setting. The poem represents a slave journey – both literally (on a ship) and metaphorically (the slave experience). Using Creole dialect allows the poet to link the poem with slave history and this is achieved not only because the poet presents the slave experience but because the sound of the language in the poem helps reflect the harshness of the conditions in which slaves lived. The rhythm of the language represents the idea of the Limbo dance being the slaves’ journey both literally (going down into the ship’s hold) and figuratively (slaves being in limbo). In the poem, the simplified grammar of the Creole dialect gives the words a harsh sound as in “stick hit sound” – which adds to the impression of the cruelty of slave punishment. Lines with monosyllabic words such as “up up up” and “down down down” enable the reader to ‘hear’ the drums of the limbo dance. Language has been used powerfully to illustrate two important ideas: that the slave experience was harsh; and that the slaves’ identities and
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