Brent Staples Analysis

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Just Walk on By: A Black Man Ponders His Power to Alter Public Space Brent Staples employs onomatopoeia to describe the black man who “could cross in front of a car stopped at a traffic light and elicit the thunk, thunk, thunk, thunk of the driver - black, white, male, or female - hammering down on the door locks.” The onomatopoeia and cacophony of “thunk” creates a harsh tone. It describes the widespread prejudice, even within his own race. Staples repeats the “thunk” four times, one for each person aside a door, thus the profiling is so common that not one person in the full car would hesitate to lock the door. The second essay uses “thunk” to express how easily he could incite fear in the inhabitants, a fear in which he took pride.…show more content…
He describes his “first victim was a woman - white, well dressed, probably in her early twenties…To her, the youngish black…seemed menacingly close.” Staples builds his ashamed tone by labeling the woman as his victim, juxtaposing the typical view of racism where the oppressed person would be the victim. Instead, he describes the woman first, elevating her status as he notes her positive features, depicting her “well dressed” and young. He distances himself from his character in the anecdote by characterizing himself in third person, “the youngish black man.” The author’s shameful tone causes readers to identify the black man as the problem rather than the racist whites. In the second essay, the reader identifies with the author, since the emphasis is put on him through the pronounced first person voice and the woman is like discussed as though she were a scared animal; the second essay lacks such a detailed description of her thoughts and appearance. The author effectively implements a regretful tone because it outlines the black man’s mischief as the basis for the…show more content…
Rather than focus on the woman, he explicates his own environment and appearance, thus placing himself as the center of the piece rather than, like the first essay, attempting to tiptoe around the prejudice. He describes himself as “wearing [his] navy pea jacket, the collar turned up, my hands snug in the pockets.” Instead of feeling ashamed from his clothing and body language, he takes pride in it. “Snug” implies comfort while the first essay wrote “shoved,” thus expressing his well-being, which he lacked in the first. The author excellently utilizes the first person point of view since it he seeks to center the essay on his own desires rather than conforming to the wishes of the society encasing

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