Ice Break Essay

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------------------------------------------------- A. Ice Break The short story “Ice Break” is written by the Canadian writer Astrid Blodgett from Edmonton, Alberta and is from the anthology The Journey Prize Stories 24 from 2012. The story circles around a family consisting of a mother, a father and three girls named Marla, Dawn and Janie. Furthermore the events take place at two locations, specifically in the home of the family and on the lake when part of the family goes ice fishing. The story jumps in time between the two locations and you follow two chronological stories by turns, which deal with the same family on different points. Already in the beginning of the short story you realize the earnestness of the situation and the mood is primarily piled with fear and anxiety throughout the story. The story begins with “We’re a long way out on the lake when the ice breaks” and just by reading the first sentence the receiver knows the main plot of the story. There are often used phrases like hard, shouting, rough, stubbly, grouchy, swears, angry and frightened, which demonstrates the seriousness of the situation and how the mood is very tense. A short story has very few characters and the protagonist and first person narrator in the story Ice Break is the second oldest daughter, named Dawn. She is engaged in a struggle against the antagonist, which is a bit ambiguous. The antagonist could both be the father or the nature and the fact that it was late in the season, which made the risk of being on the ice great. Dawn is a very flat character and her traits are limited. However we know her relationship to her father is restricted which is shown in the following quotation, “And he never knew what to talk about with me so it was uncomfortable and we both ended up saying all the wrong things.” The quote shows the lack of communication between the two
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