Do Not Be a Dormitory Noise Maker

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Do not be a dormitory noise maker Persuasive Goals: To persuade my audience not to make noise in the dorm room during bedtime. Claims: My audience should not make noise in the dorm room during bedtime because it not only influences other people’s sleep but also goes against roommates’ friendship and harmony. Audience Analysis: Favorable: Most people think they should keep quiet in the dorm room during bedtime, but they still make noise unintentionally. Introduction: I. Sometimes it’s really important not to be so active. II. Let me put it like this: What do you think of a person who plays the guitar in the dormitory after 11:00 p.m. when everyone sleeps in bed? What do you think of a person who practices his or her public speaking speech in the dorm room before 7:00 a.m. when everyone is not ready to get up? III. I bet many of you would say, “Oh, I hate this noisy guy and we should sent him to a night club or other places.” Preview Statement: It seems that none of us would welcome a noisy guy in the dorm room. Therefore, if we want to be a good roommate, we should learn to be quiet in the dorm room. Transition: Today I will show you why you should not make any noise in the dorm room when it is bedtime. I. Main Point 1: Bedtime noise has become a serious problem in college life. A. Subpoint 1: Bedtime noise will destroy students’ sleep. 1. Dorm room should be a quiet place during bedtime because students need enough sleep to relax their bodies and brains. 2. Statistics from National Sleep Foundation show that “63 percent of college students do not get enough sleep at night” (Danes n.p.) 3. According to Professor Johnston, students who are lack of sleep are “at risk for problems such as difficulties with focused attention and memory” (Danes n.p.). B. Subpoint 2: Bedtime noise has already caused many quarrels and fights among. 1. Traditionally,
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